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This is a good candidate for a future feature, however it is going through massive revisions right now. One editor has been working furiously on it, but we need time for others to review the work and polish it. Also there is a proposal to move most of the meat from GPS to the generic term GNSS. Dhaluza 01:52, 10 December 2006 (UTC)

Note - archived by nominator Raul654 23:59, 10 January 2007 (UTC)

New Jersey State Constitution

This article has undergone 2 peer reviews and this will be its second FA candidacy. I've been working on it so long (My contributions to it amount in its log to about 89%.) When you either object or comment, please leave a description of what needs fixing because peer review has simply ignored this article. Self-nom. 13:11, 17 December 2006 (UTC)

  • FAC 1
  • Object , at least for now, for the following reasons:
  • Comment — Must've missed the PR. I would like to see this article reach WP:FA status, but unfortunately it doesn't seem quite there yet. Why is the {{expandsection}} template still there? The WP:LEAD is also a bit weak; note that WP:LEAD#Writing about concepts states that notable criticisms should be summarized in the lead too. The prose isn't the best either, some examples (I read from the bottom up, and I'll try to do more copyediting later):
    • Amendments are submitted … The amendment is voted upon , inconsistent plurality. Plus, is voted upon by the houses … at least three-fifths of the house's votes again inconsistent
    • The first sections, Sections I through IV, were adopted with the rest of the constitution. Sections is redundant (and so is the first , since we know that I-IV will be first).
    • The Article orders the Legislature to pass all laws necessary for the activation the new constitution missing "of"
    • they are expired or superseded, altered, or repealed "or" is used twice?
    • The new legislature, the process of their election, and their term and rotation are created. legislature is incorrectly referred to with "their". Instead, the members of the legislature (not the legislature itself) are elected.
    • The previous sections create the process of supersession; the remaining sections are the amendments. For reasons unknown, this constitution has never been directly updated since its adoption. The amendments are enumerated in this Article. The Court of Errors and Appeals and Chancery courts are abolished, transferring the cases before them and offices under them to other courts, such as the New Jersey Supreme Court. Hm.. this paragraph doesn't flow too well. The first sentence was discussed already in the paragraph beforehands. That paragraph also notes that this article lists out the amendments. Then, this paragraph goes into Courts?
    • The requirement of the Federal Supreme Court that the apportionment of all state legislatures be by population is stated. "of" doesn’t seem right to me; perhaps "by"? The passive voice can make it a bit difficult to read (a reader might accidentally read it as that the Federal Court (not this article) must state the apportionement of the …)
    • It was passed on election day, 1966, but took effect on January 17, 2006. Odd wiki-linking (link 2006 too!), plus a citation would be helpful for this – I can hardly believe it took 40 years to take effect.
    • As seen in during the time following Jim McGreevey's resignation, New Jersey was exposed as having a disorganized executive succession plan. Awkward, and "was exposed as" is unneeded due to "as seen in" (replace w/ something else).
    • The New Jersey State Treasury Website we know it’s the website… its under "External links".
  • For just 3 sections, that's not that good. Hopefully, by the end of this FAC, the article will be in a lot better condition. Try contacting WP:NJ for additional help in improving the article. AZ  t 16:54, 17 December 2006 (UTC)
  • Object Needs more independent sources. Most of citations is the constitution itself. The article is well-written, but the references are a problem. Also, I think that there needs to be less emphasis on the constitution's contents. The article looks like a summary of the constitution. I can't see much about the prepatory work involved about the constitution. As a jurist, I would be very interested to know how and why the constitution's provisions were adopted as such (in general). When was the current consitution ratitied, under what conditions? What has been the general trends since the first constitutions of Jersey (or charters) Criticism is not a good section either. As a general rule, "criticism" sections are weasely, and anything contained in these sections should be inserted in context to other relevant sections. Two months ago I completely rewrote a Constitution article, even though I haven't had the time to look into it again, I have experienced that Constitution articles have a very bad habit of shifting to a discourse of its contents, rather than its place in society/country etc. Baristarim 00:27, 29 December 2006 (UTC)
  • Comment - A followup on Az: I don't really understand how an amendment superseded in 1995 would still be in effect in 2006. At the end of the Elections and Suffrage section, the last sentence is difficult to read. It might help to replace "to represent" with a paraphrase "". The quote should be cited. Also "who is to not have held" -> "who must not have held"? Gimmetrow 00:53, 29 December 2006 (UTC)

Oklahoma Sooners football

This is a thorough, well cited, and hopefully well written article. It has been reviewed for NPOV by the College football WikiProject. I support this article as the nominator and primary editor.-- NMajdan • talk 16:47, 21 December 2006 (UTC)

  • Comment I can't decipher a source for some of those tables - example, Coaching history. Make sure all data is sourced. Sandy (Talk) 16:56, 21 December 2006 (UTC)
  • Object . A lot of good material, but it's overall focus is very promotional. Half the table of contents is awards, with another main section being championships, making 2 out of 4 sections basically presenting a positive POV about the program. There is some information on scandals in the text, but it is relatively minimized compared to the rest. The text itself isn't all egregiously POV, but most sentences are structured to highlight the positives, making it read a bit too much like ad copy. I think there's good enough material that this could make it with some work. An example to see what I mean is the lead. All but three sentences are positive facts about the program selectively chosen to highlight the positives. Picking timeframes such as the modern era to mention it is the winningest program of the modern era, is an example of POV by selective presentation of facts. The same thing is done by focusing on winning seasons and coaches and won games. - Taxman 18:59, 21 December 2006 (UTC)
  • Object . The article reads a bit too much like Oklahoma Sooners football history - the article is essentially a history section followed by a series of lists.. For example, Gaylord Family Oklahoma Memorial Stadium is mentioned in the lead but nowhere else. The infobox has a pageantry section which contains several items notable enough to have their own article; these deserve to be mentioned in the text, under Pageantry or another suitable title. The seemingly endless lists of awards would be better converted to prose, in a manner similar to Arsenal F.C.#Statistics and records. One more minor point: it might just be because I use British English rather than American English, but to me "winningest" seems too informal for encyclopedic use. Oldelpaso 21:03, 21 December 2006 (UTC)
  • Comment - Perhaps you could convert the awards section to look something like the All-Americans box so it would take up less space and only be one item on the table of contents. Also, am I right in that Image:OU-Logo.PNG needs a fair use rationale? VegaDark 21:48, 21 December 2006 (UTC)
  • Object It's kinda like a boosters brochure or fund-raising pamphlet more than an article, this is along-standing football team that has had more than its share of fame and glory, also the prose is marginal in a lot of areas
  • Object , too much POV, advertisement here. Article is too long and needs more summarisation. Its not up to FA standards in general. Ter e nce Ong 08:53, 22 December 2006 (UTC)
  • I had a great time reading this panphlet trying to convince me to play football at Oklahoma. Oh, wait, this is an encyclopedia article? There is a lot of shoddy writing in this article, with sentences such as "This flurry of early season wins propelled them to a number two national ranking and setting the stage for one of the great college football games of the century against top-ranked Nebraska." and "The next couple coaches that came after Owen, Adrian Lindsey and Lewie Hardage, amounted to little going a combined 30-31-10 over those eight seasons." Object. -- Kicking222 15:34, 22 December 2006 (UTC)
  • I think it's a pretty good article, some of the comments above seem slightly inconsiderate a

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